After the very specific "quieter than a turtle farting" I was hoping it'd come back around at the end and we see a turtle fart or something. Also, "I'm breaking in now," was a nice moment.
After the very specific "quieter than a turtle farting" I was hoping it'd come back around at the end and we see a turtle fart or something. Also, "I'm breaking in now," was a nice moment.
What a missed opportunity hah. Thanks for the feedback!
Cool style and transitions between everything. Also, came to check out the animation, ended up enjoying the song.
Thank you!
The visuals in here are amazing, but it didn't hold my attention. I found myself being done with a shot early on and clicking ahead to move on to the next one. I think it'd work for me if the song was something with more energy, or if this were an intro to a movie I was sitting down to watch. But anyways, want to add that this is a really awesome first animation and I'm looking forward to the next one!
Thanks a lot for the critique!!
I’m a freelance artist currently compositing on Helluva Boss, and I make animations with my wife as Studio Hun. I daydream of donuts, am all about the outdoors, and live a good road trip.
Age 33, Male
2D Animation Artist
Alfred State College (2014)
New York
Joined on 11/9/17